Friday 29 May 2015

Describing More than the Obvious


 
 
The anaconda's jaw dislocates when he wants to devour large prey. If he eats something monstrous he won’t need to eat for six months.
The small boy feels worried as he sits on top of the massive anaconda wondering if it will jump up and devour (eat) him.
He hears the hiss from the anaconda, hurting his delicate ears.
He hears his heart beating like a giant stomping his giant feet.
He feels the anaconda slithering away under his sweaty trembling hands.
He feels shocked as he watches the anaconda slither through the pale water. Soon it might be blood red.
 
 
The anaconda has a jaw that dislocates so the prey can fit down its throat. When the prey reaches its stomach the skin stretches.
The ugly beast is so fat that he cannot move.
The boy feels surprised because this anaconda is not swallowing him alive.
He sees the snake trying to slither away.
He feels the scaly green and black skin.
The boy feels excited to be able to touch the anaconda.
The boy feels butterflies in his tummy because the anaconda might turn around sharply and eat him whole.
 
  
 
When the anaconda eats, it drags its prey into the water and drowns it, before eating it whole.
It can dislocate its jaw and eat animals bigger than it, such as a crocodile.
The little boy is patting the snake wondering if the slimy anaconda is going to swallow him whole.
The snake is curious if the boy is trying to hurt him or trying to be friendly.
He hears the slithering of the giant anaconda as he fingers the anaconda's scales.
The boy feels curious as he's stroking the slithering snake.
He feels thousands of scales on the slimy anaconda.
He feels that his feet are getting mouldy and wet because water is soaking into his shoes.
 
  
The anaconda is camouflaged, but getting dirtier while slithering in the mud.
The boy feels excited because he wants to take the anaconda home as a new pet.
He sees the flash of the camera and the anaconda's tail thwacking around.
He hears birds chirp in the green trees.
He hears his mother screaming, because she wants him to move away from the anaconda before it eats him whole. 
He feels the wet and gooey scales of the snake.
The boy feels as if he is an anaconda slithering in the mud too.
 
  
The anaconda is trying to blend into the misty swamp because he doesn't like being seen in the wild.
The slimy beast's jaw dislocates in order to devour prey larger than itself, like crocodiles.
The young boy child feels curious because he wants to feel the anaconda's heartbeat.
He sees his mother sunbathing whilst the snake slowly creeps into the stream.
He hears the sound of a bird tweeting and the snake hissing.
The boy feels the slimy moist reptile as it slithers through the swamp.
He feels his shoes get trapped in the mud, as he’s stroking its back.
He feels the anaconda slithering away under his sweaty trembling hands.

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