Descriptive Writing

 

This term Room 7 have been focussing on writing a series of descriptions. We have described objects, people and now have tried our hands at describing a scene.

  

The bus is in the heart of the rain forest.

The bus is a faded red and a muted white.

The branches are swaying helplessly in the wind.

The bugs underground are digging holes in the ground, nipping on plants.

The bus has a slimy surface and the tree trunks are rough.

The moss is as green as Granny Smith apples.

 

 

 

I see the bus standing still like a statue in the forest.

There is a muted red and white bus surrounded by an army of trees.

 

I see a mossy green and white bus with its door wide open.

 

I see several small snails slithering all over the lost bus,

looking for their friends and family.

The lime leaves of the tree branches are waving in the rustling wind.

 

I hear thousands of creatures scuttling under the bus scavenging for prey.

I feel the wind blowing and I see the debris scattering across the forest floor.

 
 

The bus is lying on the emerald green leaves of the forest floor.

The mossy red and white bus has its door open while the venomous spiders hang their cobwebs from the roof.

 

The bus is a rectangle with square windows and circle tyres.

 

The bus feels rough like moss that is stuck on concrete.

The trees leaves are green in the sunlight.

 

The leaves are blowing in the wind while the snails are slithering along the bus.

 

 

A muted red and white coloured bus is stuck in the brown gooey mud. 

The bus is lumpy with rust, dirt and mud.

The pale red and white bus is surrounded by the emerald green forest.

The heart shaped leaves are on cylinder trunks in the forest.

 

The oblong bus is trapped in the middle of the forest.

 

Snails slide up the back of the bus while worms squirm in the mud.